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Evan’s hand pressed firmly over my mouth.

Outside, a car door slammed.

Then another.

Footsteps.

Slow.

Deliberate.

Coming toward the house.

I could hear my own heartbeat roaring in my ears.

Evan leaned close.

« Don’t make a sound. »

His voice was barely a whisper.

The footsteps stopped outside the front door.

For several seconds, nobody moved.

Then a flashlight beam swept across the curtains.

I felt my stomach twist.

Whoever was outside was looking for someone.

Looking for us.

A phone buzzed in Evan’s pocket.

He pulled it out and stared at the screen.

The color drained from his face.

« What? » I whispered.

He swallowed hard.

« It’s him. »

« Dad? »

Evan nodded.

My entire body went cold.

Another flashlight beam crossed the window.

Then the footsteps retreated.

A car engine started.

Slowly, the vehicle drove away.

Neither of us spoke for almost a minute.

Finally, Evan turned the light back on.

His hands were shaking.

I’ve never seen my brother afraid.

Not once in my life.

Until that moment.

« Evan, » I said softly. « Tell me everything. »

He sat down heavily in a chair.

For a long time he stared at the floor.

Then he looked at me.

« The accident wasn’t an accident. »

I felt the room spin.

« What do you mean? »

« The car that burned wasn’t mine. »

I blinked.

« What? »

« It was staged. »

The words sounded impossible.

« Dad arranged it. »

I stood up so fast the chair tipped over.

« No. »

« It’s true. »

« No. »

Tears filled Evan’s eyes.

« Carrie, listen to me. »

I shook my head.

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